On 31st October, Alan
Judd, novelist and biographer, gave his feedback on our historic writing competition
entries. He told us how the high standard of writing and interesting range of
subjects made the selection of a top four extremely difficult. His positive
comments and interesting anecdotes made for a very amusing and enjoyable
meeting. First place went to Vicky Armstrong’s ‘And The Band Played On’. Alan Judd commented on the excellent use of
local sources of information to create a fascinating view of life in Bexhill in
1916. In second place was ‘A Bluebell Among The Thorns’ by Sandra Daniels. This
was judged to be a very well researched account of the life of Bluebell Klean,
a celebrated classical composer and musician, and prize winning local sea
angler. John Taylor was awarded third place for the ‘Warlingham Murder’,
praised as a very effective account of a historical event that allowed the
reader to make up their own mind about the outcome. In fourth place was ‘The Madness
of Victorian Women’ by Godfrey Forder. This piece depicted some of the
circumstances under which Victorian woman found themselves to be considered
‘mad’ and provided interesting descriptions of some of the usual treatments
administered.
Thursday, 3 November 2016
Wednesday, 19 October 2016
Novel Writing Workshop - 17th October, 2016
On 17th
October, HWG member and successful novelist, Glyn Harper, generously
shared everything he has gleaned from both his writing experience and his
own reading in a workshop entitled 'Planning Your Way Through a
Novel'. We romped through stories and their elements, protagonists,
premise, goals, conflict, tension, stakes, twists, character arcs, themes and viewpoints. We looked into place and setting and
how to analyse characters and depict their emotions as they confront
all the obstacles and setbacks thrown at them at every turn by the
dedicated author, who is intent on putting them through an Act I
Crisis, an Act II Revelation, a Mid-Point Reversal, an Act III
Disaster and the final Climax until the reader is rewarded with a
Satisfying Ending. It was a thorough and entertaining talk, and we
all left feeling inspired to have a go ourselves.
Friday, 7 October 2016
Historical Writing Entries - 3rd October, 2016
It was like
taking a roller-coaster ride in a time machine on 3rd
October, when members read out their entries for the group's last
competition of the year: non-fictional historical writing. There were
vivid childhood memories: of finding a bayonet at the end of World
War I and the sweet sin of licking jam out of tarts during the 1953
coronation celebrations. There was an array of colourful ancestors: a
camp conscientious objector who did time in Wormwood Scrubs, a star
cricketer with an unusual name and a débutante who made a
life-changing secret liaison with an African prince. There were
portraits of two fascinating and feisty women: Mary 'Slasher'
Richardson, the suffragette who sliced the Rokeby Venus, and Bluebell
Klean, who stopped 'chasing musical dreams to chase fish'. Places
also came under scrutiny: the history of Church in the Wood, founded
in 1090 by a priest who wanted a church hidden from the devil, and
the Bexhill celebrations of 1917, when the band played on and
elegance was everywhere. On a darker note, we also learned about the
1948 Warlingham Murder, when a shotgun rang out from 76, Harrow
Gardens, and the so called madness of Victorian women. It was a very
entertaining evening, and judge, Alan Judd, has his work cut out.
Tuesday, 20 September 2016
Planning Meeting - 19th September, 2016
On 19th
September, it was our annual planning meeting, at which members
gather to suggest competitions, judges and activities for the
following year before voting to finalise the programme. A small but
enthusiastic group assembled to discuss what we all wanted to do. There was
agreement and disagreement, but fortunately, it was always amicable.
This was a particularly important meeting as 2017 sees us celebrate
our platinum anniversary as Hastings Writers' Group was founded in 1947 and is one of the oldest in the country. Another item on the agenda
was, therefore, the celebration anthology, Strandline 11; it was
unanimously voted to have an anthology and to have it unthemed but
'drawing inspiration' from the platinum celebration year. Many of the
members present immediately volunteered to be involved in the project
as writers, editors and proof-readers. 2017 will be a very busy
year for the group as honorary member, Rosemary Bartholomew, is also
organising a children's anthology to raise money for three local
children's charities. Stories and poems are invited from primary-aged children
(5 to 11) who live in Hastings or St Leonards. For
more information, please email hwg.childrensproject@gmail.com
Manuscript Evening - 5th September, 2016
On 5th
September, the group focused on the craft of writing through various
problem-solving activities. In the first half, veteran Bill Petsing,
read out 'Mistaken Betrayal', his ongoing memoir of World War II. He
had acted on previous critique from group members, and everyone
noticed the work was much improved. After the break, our Vice-Chair
and best-selling author. Kate O'Hearn, shared a real and
thorny problem with her current manuscript, 'Phoenix,
Fire and Raynne'. As a children's author, she said she was finding it
difficult to write from an adult's point of view, particularly as the
adult in question is a terrifyingly evil demon and so was having to
do it via another adult's perspective. She read out a section, but
everyone said that it was convincing and that there was nothing to
worry about, so she now feels more confident about carrying on.
However, it just goes to show that even the most experienced and
successful of writers need a bit of encouragement now and again. As
always, all members learned something about the perennially
fascinating challenge of
writing.
Tuesday, 16 August 2016
Poetry Results - 15th August, 2016
On 15th August, poet, Roz Goddard, came to give feedback
and announce the winners of our poetry competition. She said the
first element in poetry should be the heart rather than the head
and gave her comprehensive judging criteria,
including the creation of lines and phrases that ‘caught'
her, the poem’s
effectiveness when read aloud, its look on the page and the skills of
‘poetic handicraft’ that
it demonstrated. In first
place was 'The Father's Tale'
by
Vicky Armstrong,
praised for its excellent
use of the Icarus myth, its skilful layout and its 'heartbreaking'
effect. 'The
Bryn'
by
Diana Lock was
second, Jane
Hempson-Jones' 'Peace' was
third, and 'Haiku
on Kuniyoshi'
by
Roz Balp was
fourth. Roz Goddard
commented on the effective
use of imagery and the adoption of rhyme schemes which might either
enhance or ‘hem the poem
in'.
In the
question and answer session, she
advised: ‘letting the
words flow’, writing a first draft in prose and allowing the
structure to emerge as
well as reading lots of
contemporary poetry through magazines like Rialto
or Under
the Radar. She
encouraged the non-winners by saying that all
judgements are ‘subjective and tell us much about the judge and her
reading and experience.’
Friday, 5 August 2016
History Workshop - 1st August, 2016
On 1st
August, we were privileged to welcome our speaker, Ann Kramer, who
gave an invaluable and inspiring workshop on writing historical
non-fiction to prepare us for the group's final competition of the
year. She has a long career as a professional author and has written
60 books on history for both adults and children, as well as many
articles. Ann managed to condense her considerable experience into
some very clear advice on how to go about approaching the task.. She
responded with ease to questions from the floor, outlining a clear
procedure for planning, finding an original angle as well as giving a
very thorough guide on how to tackle the thorny problem of research,
giving useful tips on how to find and use a variety of sources.
Finally, she gave us two practical activities to get us started,
which propelled us from vague ideas to a definite starting point.
Throughout the evening, Ann was positive and encouraging, so we all
feel more confident about taking the first step on this unfamiliar
path.
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